The line graph shows visitor number to 5 attractions in the city of Parkvale from 1996 to 2016.

The line graph shows visitor number to 5 attractions in the city of Parkvale from 1996 to 2016.
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The line chart provides key information about visitor number to the State Zoo, National Gallery, Indigenous Art Centre, Museum, and Aquarium in the city of Parkvale from 1996 to 2016. The units are measured in thousands.
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, it is clear from the graph that the National Gallery had the highest number of
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.
In addition
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, the figure of Museum
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almost remained
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constant throughout the interval,
whereas
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the Aquarium showed a gradual decrease.
According to
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what is shown, the State Zoo had around 300,000
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in 1996. It declined slightly to 200,000 in 2000,
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continued to fluctuate between 200 and around 250 thousand. The National Gallery rose significantly from about 350,000 to over 800,000
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in 2004, increasing to slightly below 1000 by 2016. In terms of the Aquarium attraction, it began with roughly 500 thousand
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in 1996. Afterwards, it dropped gradually over the years, representing less than 100 thousand by 2016.
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the attraction of the indigenous Art Centre started at about 20,000, it continued to grow to approximately 330,000 in 2016.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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