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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data provides information about the quantity of
milk
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 that was produced in four countries in the
year
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years
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 1990 , 2000 and 2010 , which was measured in litres.
Overall
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, there was considerable growth in
milk
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 production over the
years
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 for
all
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the nation, the total amount of
milk
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 produced in Australia saw a decline in 2010.
Netherlands
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The Netherlands
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 accounted for the Highest shares,
while
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 that of Guatemala
were
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 the lowest.
Netherlands
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The Netherlands
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 produced the highest quantity of
milk
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 for all the
years
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 mentioned
with
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, with
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 statistics of 11
,
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 262,000 in 1990 , 11,1555,000 in 2000 and 11,466,000 in 2010. Followed by
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 was Australia, whose figures were the highest in the
intial
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initial
years
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, which were equating to or more than 11,000,000 .
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, these figures saw a gradual decline in 2010, standing at 9,165,000. Tanzania
,
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also
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 witnessed a growth in its quantity of
milk
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 production throughout the
years
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, starting from 87,000
in1990
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in 1990
 and reaching 1,55,000 in 2010. A
simliar
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similar
 uptrend was observed for the amount of
milk
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 produced in Guatemala
which
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 rose from 26,000 in the beginning to 84,000 towards the end, making it the lowest figure compared to the other nations.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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