When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a good thing or a bad thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, most people
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judge
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very quickly , which is normal among human beings.
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, they may see you as a bad
person
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based on your actions. In
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essay, I'll give my own opinion
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and include examples from real-life experiences that happened to me.
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, you can't
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a
person
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without getting to know them first. Yes, you may see his actions as dangerous and horrible, but when you actually get to know
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they're very kind and generous.
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, they can even help with all kinds of things , like giving advice or lending you some money you need.
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, from my own experience, one of my friends who does all kinds of bad things vapes, drifts, talks to girls, but when I began to talk to him, I found out that he's probably the kindest and most helpful guy I have ever met.
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, it's very normal to
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fast, but you have to make sure if he really is a bad
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.
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, you may counter a guy with a lot of tattoos
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first glance, some people may see him as a gangster and a bad
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, but when you get to know them and hear their story, you'll say the opposite.
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, you may not like his personality or the way he jokes, but in the end, he won't make anyone sad.
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, personally, it's a good thing, because you may counter a good guy who seems nice and kind, but actually wants bad for you even tho he doesn't show it. Despite all of
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, one must have to
judge
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and get to know them for you're own safety.

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task response
Plan your essay. State your view clearly at the start and keep it the same through the essay.
coherence
Link ideas with simple words and clear links. Use 'also', 'but', 'however', 'for example'.
grammar
Fix grammar: write shorter sentences, check pronouns and articles, and use proper punctuation.
content
The student gives real-life examples to support ideas.
structure
There is some use of transition words.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • first impression
  • initial judgment
  • stereotypes
  • assess
  • non-verbal cues
  • body language
  • appearance
  • facade
  • misjudgments
  • unfair judgments
  • decision-making process
  • social situation
  • character
  • repeated interactions
  • open-mindedness
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