The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.

The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.
The pie charts illustrate the
proportion
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of people between the ages of 23 and 65 working in various occupations in the UK and in a town called Ashby in 2008.
Overall
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, the
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of employees working in office
jobs
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was the highest among all occupations in the UK,
whereas
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in Ashby, the largest share of workers was in personal service. In the UK, the highest
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of employees worked in office
jobs
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, at around 19% in 2008. The figure for personal services and technical fields was the same, at about 17%,
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the percentage of people working in professional
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was lower, at 13%.
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, the figures for unemployment and construction work were the lowest, at approximately 10%. In Ashby, personal services accounted for the largest
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of workers, at around 21% in 2008. The percentage of employees in office
jobs
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was higher than in construction work.
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, the
proportion
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of unemployment and retail work was the same, at 14%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, jobs with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Occupation
  • Distribution
  • Economy
  • Local vs National
  • Major employer
  • Educational institution
  • Balanced distribution
  • Skewed
  • Trends
  • Implications
  • Economic development
  • Social services
  • Educational planning
  • Employment landscape
  • Geographic location
  • Urban dynamics
  • Rural dynamics
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