You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter, offer to make a popular dish from your country describe what this dish is explain why it should be included in the event

Dear

Mr.

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Luis, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing to you in connection

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with

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the event

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that is

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being organised by

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the Inetrnational

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Inetrnational

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International

student's club

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Students ' Club

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. I want to make an offer to

presernt

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present

a famous dish from my home country. The dish is known as " Kheer". It is a sweet dessert, and

was

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originated from the

north

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northern

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part of India. It is made of rice, milk, cream,

sweetner

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sweetener

, and different kinds of dried fruits and nuts. It is a healthy dessert

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made with all pure and unprocessed

ingredians

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ingredients

. As in the event, many

partcipents

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participants

are presenting foods

form

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from

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the different

nook

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and corners of the world. I would

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like the opportunity

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to make my dish gain recognition on an international level.

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, I was hoping to see you once before the actual event as a member of the club to discuss some arrangements. I am available

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saturday

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, let me know if you can make it. If not, we can decide as per your

convinience

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convenience

. Yours

sincererly

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sincerely

, Lovprit Kaur

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Nov 7, 2025

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structure

Use one clear plan: intro, body about the dish, and reason to join the event. Break long text into small, easy to read parts.

vocabulary/spelling

Check spell and common words. Fix small mistakes like 'present' and 'ingredients'.

content

Keep one idea in each part and end with a short, clear ask or request.

content

The letter asks to show the dish and says why it should be chosen.

tone

Polite tone and a kind closing.

content

Name of the dish and its origin are given.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

176 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Enthusiastic
Contribution
Cuisine
Traditional
Ingredients
Preparation
Cultural significance
Celebrate
Diversity
Culinary traditions
National dish
Occasion
Unique attributes
Preparation method
Gourmet
Authentic
Flavorful
Recipe
Event arrangements
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