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Writing Samples
Band 4

A building company is planning to build new houses on some land near where you live, and has asked the public for comments. Write a letter to the manager of the building company. In your letter say how you heard about the building company's plan give your opinion of the plan say what you hope the building company will do

Dear
sir
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Sir
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, I
living
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live
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 in
phu hiep ward
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Phu Hiep Ward
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 of
hue city
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Hue City
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, where your
company
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 have
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plan
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plans
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building
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to build
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 new houses. I
hearded
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heard
 about the building
company
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’s
plan
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 from
parents
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my parents
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and
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, and
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 I am writing
this
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 letter to let you know that I
quite
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am quite
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impresstion
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impressed
 and
hightly
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highly
appreciation
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appreciate
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 about
plan
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 of your
company
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. I would like to let you know that most people enjoy it and will
helps
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help
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 you if you need. One important thing about new houses is that it is the
place
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places
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will
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that will
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be
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apply
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bring
for
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apply
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people
relax
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to relax
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 and exercise
space
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apply
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.
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, one problem that I have encountered is that transport is quite inconvenient. I think that it is not
big
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a big
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 problem for your
company
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.
Inaddition
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In addition
,
from
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in
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 my opinion of the
plan
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 that we should plant multiple
tree
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trees
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 and
flower
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flowers
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 around there. And I hope
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while
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that while
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 building new
houses
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houses,
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 your
company
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 can limit garbage and air pollution. Please let me know if you have any questions or need any
further
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informations
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information
 Sincerely, Mr toàn.

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grammar
Correct big grammar and spelling errors. For example, 'I living' should be 'I live', 'hearded' should be 'heard', 'hightly' should be 'highly'.
structure
Put each idea in its own paragraph. Start with your tied idea, then give your view and end with what you want the firm to do.
tone
Use a clear formal tone. Use proper greeting and closing like 'Dear Sir or Madam' and 'Yours sincerely'.
content
Keep your plan and wish short. Ask a clear request or phrase what you want the company to do next.
content
You say how you feel and what you want.
tone
You tell what you hope the company will do.
Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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