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nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. some people think that face-to-face interactions is essential. discuss both views and your opinion.

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 are very importants, because you can know the people, and see his emotion, today all people public a lot of photos in social media but it is not the true, because they use a lot of filters and other thinks, so it is the reason, if you want know a real pepope yo have to talk with them
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task response
You should write about both sides of the topic and give your own view. Add ideas that show why people may like online chat and why face to face talk can be better. Give a small clear example.
coherence cohesion
Use clear order in your writing. Start with a short plan (an intro). Then two or three body parts. End with a short end. Link words like first, and, but, so, also help the flow.
content
You state your view on the topic.
linguistic
You use short, simple sentence form to share ideas.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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