The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.
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bar chart compares the amount of contributions from three different divisions in India between 1960 and 2000.
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, the proportion of agriculture decreased gradually,
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that of service rose significantly over time.
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, there was a small fluctuation in the percentage of
industry
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the industry
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, the largest growth was in the services area for the next 10 years from 1990, and the smallest difference was in the industry sector during the same period.
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of all, in 1960, the agriculture sector contributed to 60% of Indian GDP, falling to about half and more than 40% in 1970 and 1980, respectively. The largest drop was displayed at a third in 1990.
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, over 10% of contributions were from the agriculture department in the final year.
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the percentage of service grew steadily from less than 20 per cent in 1960
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to probably one quarter in 1980.
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, it jumped significantly to around 40% and above 60% for ten respective years. The trend of the industry division remained relatively stable for forty years from and to
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fifth. The lowest point of it was in 1960, and its peak was in 1980.

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