The maps below show how the layout of a building has changed over the past five years.

The maps below show how the layout of a building has changed over the past five years.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show how the layout of a building has changed over the past five years.
The diagram features the plan of the rooms five years ago and at present.
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, the uses of the rooms have changed considerably. The modernised building has more facilities, including an audio and conference
room
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. Notably, the location of the entrance door has remained unchanged. When you entered the building in the past, you would have found
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book shelves
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and an office on your right. In the very
center
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of the building were four sets of study tables, and to the right of them, there were computer books. On the western part of the building, a
book
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information
room
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, a meeting
room
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, and a classroom were situated next to each other. Meanwhile, another
bookshelves
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were
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on the north side. In its current form, the building is a different place. The former office has been transformed into a conference
room
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, and there is an audio
room
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where the classroom used to be. A printing machine is newly nestled to the left of the main door.
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, two more study tables have been introduced, and there are six sets nowadays. Conspicuously, the places of the
book
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information
room
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, the meeting
room
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, the
book
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shelves, and the computer books
room
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have
left
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, book with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changed" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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