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Band 1

Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. What are the benefits of learning languages? How to learn a new language effectively?

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Introduction
Many think learning several
langugaes
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languages
 has
it
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its
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 own future,it to improve
comuncation
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communication
 with others
,
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. For
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for
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instance
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instance,
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travilng
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travelling
 to a
diffrent
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different
 city
it
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apply
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could be meaningful for
the ones
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those
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 who
speaks
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speak
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 the
country
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country's
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 language
, they
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. They
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got
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get
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 to know about the culture if they
comunicate
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communicate
 with the residents
with
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in
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there
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their
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 own language
, they
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. They
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 would feel more
comfotable
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comfortable
to tell
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telling
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 them stories,
even
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and even
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 asking for
dierction
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directions
 would be a lot easier
Body paragraph 1
Due to
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 the
advancment
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advancement
 of
technolgy
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technology
, it
beacme
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has become
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 a lot easier to acquire a new
languages
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language
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,
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.
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transletion
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Translation
 helps to improve the
quilty
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quality
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 of learning by
understand
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understanding
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 the context, to gain a new language
for
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, for
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a
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apply
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starter
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starters
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use
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, use
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transltion
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translation
 to comprehend context and complex.
Conclusion
The gist of the matter,
its
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it's
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 not
unattendable
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impossible
 to
gain
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learn
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 a new
languages
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language
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due to
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 the developments of technology,matter fact
it
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, it
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became
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has become
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 a lot easier.

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weakness
State the two parts of the task in the first line and finish with a short end.
tip
Use linking words to tie ideas, such as first, also, but, and.
tip
Add a clear example, like a trip or talk with a local person, to show ideas.
weakness
Check spelling and grammar of easy words to fix small errors.
strength
The idea that language helps with travel and culture is clear.
strength
The writer uses one big view and a chance to use tech.
effort
There is some plan to talk about the topic, which shows work.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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