the most important aim science should be to improve peoples lives. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statment?

People from all around the world should be in favour of scientific
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,
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should
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exact target, so citizens could use the most from it. But societies do not always follow
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mindset, and some have even decided to go against it.
Science
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could be used to help humanity develop and improve.
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, it could be used to produce clean energy, so
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global warming slows down.
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, life improvement is
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connected to the
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science
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development.
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, even with one or two minor changes to farming methods, a huge difference in production amount and quality could be seen. Knowledge is the key to
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, and
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power
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can be used in any direction. Whether it is going to benefit people by producing cheaper energy and more food, or
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be used in weapons of mass destruction.
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, countries have used
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cruel form of
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in order to win wars by building chemical weapons, which
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a horrible effect on animal habitats and
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people's lives. In conclusion,
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is a two-edged blade which could be used both to help
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damage societies. It is our job to guide it
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the best way which would help humanity the most.

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task-response
State your clear position on whether you agree or disagree with the statement.
structure
Add a clear plan in the introduction: state your view, what you will discuss, and in the conclusion restate your view.
grammar
Use simple, exact words. Some phrases are a bit odd. Check for grammar and make phrasing steady.
examples
Give more solid examples and explain how they show your view.
coherence
Link ideas with smoother transitions between paragraphs and sentences.
content
The essay talks about both good and bad sides of science.
examples
Examples about clean energy and farming show you can use evidence.
evaluation
Conclusion says science must be guided for the good of people.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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