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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years age and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years age and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram features the floor plan of a
library
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twenty
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 years ago and at present.
Overall
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, the
uses
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 of the rooms in the central
library
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have
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 changed considerably. The modernised
library
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 has more facilities, including a café, computer
room
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 and three self-service machines. When you entered the
library
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 in the past, you would have found a reading
room
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 on your left and a curved enquiry desk for tickets and book returns on your right. In the very centre of the
library
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 were two sets of tables and chairs. Adult fiction
books
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 were on the left, and non-fiction
books
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 were on the right. In the back right and left corners, you could have visited a
room
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 for borrowing CDs, videos and computer games and another for children's
books
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. In its current form, the
library
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 is a very different place. The reading
room
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 is now a computer
room
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, and there is a café where the enquiry desk used to be. Above the café are a smaller adult fiction
books
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 section, an information desk and three self-service machines. On the opposite side, reference
books
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 have taken the place of adult non-fiction
books
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. Conspicuously, there are no tables and chairs in the current
library
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. The
room
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 for children's
books
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 is now a lecture
room
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, and there is an enlarged
room
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 in the back left corner that includes two
L shaped
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 sofas and fiction
books
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 for children. The
library
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 holds storytelling events here.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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