The table below gives information on what people in five different countries chose to do with their discretionary income. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on what people in five different countries chose to do with their discretionary income. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information on what people in five different countries chose to do with their discretionary income. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the proportion of spending on various items of their income in five different countries
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Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey.
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, all five countries in 2002 spent the highest percentage of their income on
food
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, drinks, or
tobacco
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spending was very less on leisure education, but clothing or footwear experienced a moderate outlay. In 2002, Ireland's consumer spending was 28.91% on
food
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, drinks and
tobacco
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, Clothing accounted for 6.43%
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leisure accounted for 2.21%, which was very less. Italy and Spain spent their income on
food
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or
tobacco
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, 16.36% and 18.80% respectively. For clothing, 9% and 6.5% compared to the first two categories, the spending was less in leisure and education. Sweden spent 15.77% on
food
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or
tobacco
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it spent 5.40% and 3.22% on the other two categories. Turkey accounted for 32.14%
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food
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or drinks, which was the lowest in all other countries , but Turkey's spending was one-fifth
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the other two categories.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, tobacco with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • discretionary income
  • expenditure
  • spending patterns
  • comparisons
  • outliers
  • cultural influence
  • economic conditions
  • leisure activities
  • trend analysis
  • cost of living
  • socioeconomic factors
  • proportion
  • priority
  • developed countries
  • employment rates
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