The charts below show the use of water for agriculture products in Australia in 2004 and values of these products to the Australian economy in the same year.

The charts below show the use of water for agriculture products in Australia in 2004 and values of these products to the Australian economy in the same year.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the use of water for agriculture products in Australia in 2004 and values of these products to the Australian economy in the same year.
The pie chart illustrates the
water
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used in agricultural products in Australia in 2004 and the
income
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from agricultural products.
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, livestock consumed the largest
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, and the highest
income
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came from fruits. Livestock used the biggest amount of
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, accounting for 36%. Vegetables and rice presented a similar percentage, only 4% and 5%. The remaining groups had
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percentage between 10% and 19%.
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the data, sugar and fruit had nearly the same uses, 10% and 11%.
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, dairy was a second role at 19%, and cotton consumed 15% use of
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water
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. In terms of
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, fruit was the most profitable product, and its consumption was located on a medium stage. The least
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goods were rice,
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1%. Meanwhile, its consumption of
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was low. Dairy was the second most profitable commodity, 25%, which was nearly half of the
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of fruit. The rest of
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the classes
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had nearly the same
percent
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per cent
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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