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The Graph Below Shows The Average Number Of Vietnamese Students Studying In France, America And Russia Between 2000 And 2015

The Graph Below Shows The Average Number Of Vietnamese Students Studying In France, America And Russia Between 2000 And 2015
The line graph illustrates the information about the Vietnamese who studied in three countries, America, Russia, and
France
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, from 2000 to 2015. The given unit is in millions.
Overall
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, America had the largest number, despite beginning from a small figure
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France
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 and Russia had fluctuating amounts of students over the period.
To begin
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 with, America, in the year 2000, the number of students was about 1.5
million
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.
Thereafter
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, the number increased dramatically and reached exactly 5
million
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.
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the
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Russia had 3
million
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 students at the start, but later slightly fell to just about 2
million
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, followed by below 2
million
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, and later jumped to 2.5
million
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 in the year 2015.
In contrast
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, in 2000,
France
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 accounted for about 1
million
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 and dropped to 2.5
million
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 in 2005, and it remained stable up to 2010. After that,
France
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 experienced a dramatic increase, reaching about 4.5
million
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at the end
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 of the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words france, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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