There are those who claim that big cities are much suitable places for adolescence to live in. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people insist that residing in
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brings more benefits to teenagers than
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residing in
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the countryside.
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how a crowded population causes a positive effect on them and that developed infrastructure improves their educational environment, followed by a reasoned conclusion. The young generations in urban
areas
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tend to interact more with their peers, because there is
larger
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population than in rural
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.
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, there are far more chances to meet and
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with various groups of individuals,
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young
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rural
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face the same group of people daily in their towns.
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helps them to learn valuable skills to cope with many types of people in numerous situations.
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, a recent study by Sydney University found that the time for reacting to an unexpected situation was three times shorter in teenagers living in the main city than those living in other suburbs.
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, infrastructure in
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helps them to gain more educational opportunities. Many schooling facilities,
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as an English academy, extracurricular classes, and
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speech training,
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in the middle of
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, because they want to attract more students with the advantage of better accessibility.
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, students in urban
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can get a qualified schooling without far travelling,
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the rural residents are provided with just an official education.
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leads to a higher rate of university enrolment among
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cities
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high school graduates.
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it is well known that more students in
cities
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decide to enrol on universities than those in the countryside, as the latter choose to stay in their town and to take over their family business. In conclusion,
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that
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living in
cities
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for teenagers is worthwhile
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two positive effects in terms of raising their human treating skills and improving their studying environment.

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task response
You state your view and stay on the topic.
coherence
You give two main ideas that link to the topic.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Topic Vocabulary:
  • adolescence
  • suitable
  • advantages
  • educational opportunities
  • cultural experiences
  • recreational activities
  • healthcare facilities
  • networking
  • career opportunities
  • disadvantages
  • cost of living
  • competition
  • pressure
  • close-knit communities
  • pollution
  • environmental issues
  • safety concerns
  • conclusion
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