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Topic: Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a big city.

It is usually believed that some
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 think that cities are the are think better places to live
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 In my opinion, I
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agree
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with
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 may
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have disadvantages
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 of living in a big city .In
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 essay, I am going to discuss
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 question from both points of view and give reasons for my opinion. On one hand, I have some main reasons for my opinion.My first reason is that ..
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, ..My second reason is that ..
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:
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.
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, many
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 do not agree with me. They believe that ..
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 means that ......
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, there are no easy answers to
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tend to believe that
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 it is important to

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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