Nowadays more and more tasks at home and at work are being performed by robots. Why do you think it’s happening? Is it a negative or positive development?

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can help us do many tasks at home or at work. Some
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it would bring negative effects, but others think it will benefit our society.
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phenomenon is caused by many reasons, and I think it is a positive development. It is
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undoubtedly
that
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bring many advantages to our lives.
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it can improve our life qualities. They are able to help
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finish much
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at home, like sweeping floors, washing dishes, and feeding pets. With the help of
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can save a lot of time doing tedious things so that they are able to spend more time on some vital things,
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as keeping a company and travelling all over the world.
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can make our lives safer. They can do dangerous tasks for
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,
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can not only help
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defuse bombs in specific conditions but
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help them explore
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space in the future. With the help of
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,
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are able to reduce risks of being injured or
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so that they are more likely to live a longer life and promote
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the development
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society. In conclusion, nowadays
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work can be done by
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robots
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because they can improve
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quality and make their lives safer.
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, it is a positive development.

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structure
Plan your answer before you write. Start with a clear view, then give two or three ideas with simple proof or examples.
grammar
Fix small grammar and spelling. Use 'robots' not 'robot', 'believe' not 'believes', 'much work' not 'much works'.
idea development
Add more explanation for each idea. Show how a point can help or hurt, with simple detail.
structure
The essay shows a plan with 'First' and 'Second' in ideas.
idea
The writer argues for a positive view and stays on topic.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • robotics
  • automation
  • revolutionized
  • industries 4.0
  • mundane
  • intricate tasks
  • technological advancement
  • accessible
  • efficiency
  • precision
  • economic factors
  • labor costs
  • dependency
  • quality of life
  • creative
  • strategic
  • interpersonal tasks
  • innovation
  • job opportunities
  • job displacement
  • digital divide
  • marginalized
  • environmental impact
  • disposal
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