The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present
The illustration presents the progression of a village called Ryemoth from the year 1995 to and present.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the village in size hasn't expanded,
although
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the purpose of the buildings has changed , and the village
gives
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provides
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more diverse accessibility for villagers. In 1995, Ryemouth had a street that was surrounded by, on one side of the
road
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, shops and
on the other hand
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a fish market. Going up the
road
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to the East, there was a cafe and a hotel that had a sea overview with a fishing port right next to the coast. To
this
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street, there is an added
road
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to the north , which leads to houses right next to it , and driving by the houses to the East is a huge farmland and a nature park. Currently, only the hotel, cafe and housing have stayed the same,
although
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there is an extra
road
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has been added to the West from the previous houses, which gives more opportunities for house building. The most significant change is that now , in the land where there was the farmland and park, there is a connected area for tennis courts and golf. In Ryemouth, there are now restaurants and apartments, which are in the same buildings as previously the shop and fish market. For the hotel , there is now an added parking lot to the East of it , but for the view of the sea, there is no longer the view of the port because it's been taken off.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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