Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

Dear Mr Hai, I’m a member of the gym

Hali

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, Hali

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, my

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. My

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name is Le Thi Van Anh,

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and my

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birthday is 13.08.2000. I registered from August 2024 to August 2026

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now I have a yellow card

, my

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. My

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company is HA 2000. What a pity

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apply

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that I must move to another City next month, because my Work it changed and I will be moving to another City. I find that, in the gym, Hali is full of Devices,

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and besides

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besides

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besides,

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the coaches are friendly and enthusiastic. But I want to cancel my membership, because I must come news City. What procedures do I need to follow to cancel members?

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, I have paid 30 $

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month , and what fees do I have to pay? Please reply to me Yours sincerely.

quynhtranhbh

Nov 21, 2025

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task response

Be clear about the aim. Say you want to cancel and give a date or notice.

organization

Divide the note into parts. Put the cancel start in one part and the questions in another.

content

Ask only needed questions and tidy up spelling and mark. Make the voice calm and plain.

tone

polite tone with a greeting and closing.

purpose

the letter shows the main idea to cancel.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

129 words

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