the table below shows the number of mobile phones and personal computers per thousand people in six different countries in 2003.

the table below shows the number of mobile phones and personal computers per thousand people in six different countries in 2003.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the table below shows the number of mobile phones and personal computers per thousand people in six different countries in 2003.
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of mobile phones and personal computers
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six countries in the year 2003.
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, the countries which have the most people with mobiles
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have the biggest
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of PC
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, leaving Germany, South Korea and China with fewer
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for these two devices. Having the largest
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of telephone and computer holders is Luxembourg, with 872 for phones and 900 for PC.
On the other hand
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, Italy and Singapore have the second largest amount of device
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, having the mobile numbers at 737 for Italy and 684 for Singapore, but the computer count at 480 for Italy and 690 for Singapore.
However
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, Germany and South Korea have a smaller
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of mobile users, compared to the three countries already mentioned, with Germany having 586 and South Korea 380, but the
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of PC
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is the exact same for the two, with the
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452. Leaving with the least amount of
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for both categories is China, with only 35 for telephones and 88 for computers.

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