The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustrated map shows the current industrial

area

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in Norbiton City,

along with

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the planned transformation for the neighbourhood. The prospective development plan is to increase the number of public facilities

such

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as the playground, school, shop, and medical centre.

Moreover

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, in the future, there will be no factories in Norbiton's industrial site. All will be replaced by housing. Looking in detail, the south-east

area

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of the site will have the most modification with the new construction of a medical centre and playground. Current factories are going to be replaced by housing and the school.

Likewise

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, the new shop will be built near the roundabout, where the factories in the

area

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will

also

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be swapped into housing. With regards to the road, there will be substantial changes, where there is an additional roundabout.

Furthermore

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, a new road crossing the river will be constructed, leading into the farmland.

In addition

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, new housing will be built at the north intersection of the road, located in the

area

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of the farms.

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