Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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allocating their annual budgets to

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, many people argue that governments should prioritise other urgent issues, as

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money could be better spent on areas that directly benefit the nation. I disagree with the statement because so many things are still unknown about the beyond of

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system. Knowledge about the universe is essential because it allows

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to take preventive measures against potential disasters originating from outer

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. Some people believe that humans and other species on Earth may not be the only forms of life

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the universe. Their existence might collide with

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in the future

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the effects are still unknown.

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natural disaster that needs to be learned.

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, solar flares, falling meteors, or even planetary collisions could pose serious threats to life on Earth.

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the cost of

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exploration

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is undeniably high,

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investment is worthwhile for protecting the future of humankind.

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, there are several urgent issues that

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attention. National

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as poverty, hunger, rising unemployment, and even pandemics are

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around the world. It often seems that there are unlimited problems but only limited resources available to solve them. To ensure an effective approach, the governments could allocate a

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budget by spending a larger proportion on essential sectors

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as healthcare and the economy,

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assigning a smaller proportion to

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way to address all priorities. In conclusion,

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some people believe that intergalactic

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is a waste of money and that the budget should be directed towards more urgent issues,

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research remains too important to disregard. Gaining knowledge about what lies beyond the planet can bring significant benefits to humankind

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, continuous

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is still necessary.