It is ten years since you left college. You'd like to organise an event to celebrate this anniversary with all your friends and classmates from college. Write a letter to one of your college friends. In your letter • say what kind of celebration event you'd like to organise • explain why you think it would be good to celebrate in this way • describe what help you need to organise this event

Dear Anaya, I hope you are doing well. Can you believe it has already been ten years since we graduated from college? To mark

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special milestone, I am planning a small reunion event and would love for you to be involved. I am thinking of organising an evening gathering at the Lakeside Banquet Hall, where we could have dinner, music, and a short slideshow of our college memories. I feel

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would be a wonderful way to celebrate because it would allow everyone to reconnect in a relaxed and enjoyable setting. Many of us have moved to different cities, and

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reunion would give us a chance to catch up, share our journeys, and relive some of the fun moments we had during those years. I would really appreciate your help with contacting our classmates and managing the guest list, as you still stay in touch with most of them. Please

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let me know if you have any suggestions for the venue or programme. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Warm regards, Trisha

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Nov 23, 2025

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task response

The plan is clear and easy to see, but add a bit more detail on the date/time and how to RSVP.

coherence

Link ideas with small joins like 'also' or 'and' to help flow.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are strong; keep them simple and friendly.

single idea per paragraph

Try to keep each paragraph to one big idea.

task response

Clear aim and friendly tone that suit a letter to a friend.

coherence

Good structure with a clear plan and reasons.

coherence

Each paragraph has a main idea.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

176 words

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