The diagram shows how apple is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing

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apples canned

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canned apples

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.

Overall

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it is clear that

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it is quite a lengthy process that involves 14 stages, beginning with picking

apples

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and ending with sending

theme

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them

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to supermarkets. In the first stage, fresh

apples

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are picked by

hands

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from the plants, and

then

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transported

them

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apply

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to the factory by large van, where

washing

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apply

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them

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they

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to

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are washed to

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have

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produce

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clean and quality

apples

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.

Next,

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the quality

apples

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are stored in a cold store. After that, the good

apples

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are weighed with a specific grade.

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,

peeling

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the

apples

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and

cutting

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them into similar slices.

Consequently

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,

apples

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are packaged in cans and sealed

them

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apply

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.

Following

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this

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stage, put the cans in hot water and

sterilizing

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sterilise

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them carefully. In the final stage,

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I labeled

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labeled

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the cans with the necessary information and put them in a store to become ready for

despatch

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dispatch

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to supermarkets for sales.