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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the estimated oil
production
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 capacity of six Gulf
countries
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 from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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,
Saudi
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Arabia
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 consistently produced the highest amount of oil throughout the period,
while
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 Qatar remained the lowest producer. All six
countries
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 showed steady growth in their
production
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 levels over time. In 1990,
Saudi
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Arabia
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 generated about 8.5
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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, far exceeding all other
countries
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. Iran and Iraq produced approximately 3 and 2
million
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barrels
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 , respectively,
while
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 Kuwait and the UAE were slightly above 2
million
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. Qatar recorded less than 1
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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. By 2000 and 2005, oil
production
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 had risen gradually across the region.
Saudi
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Arabia
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 increased to around 10 and
then
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 12
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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,
while
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 the other
countries
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 grew modestly, remaining below 4
million
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barrels
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. In 2010,
production
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 reached its peak in every country.
Saudi
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Arabia
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 rose to nearly 15
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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. Iran and Iraq reached around 4.5 and 4
million
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,
while
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 Kuwait and the UAE produced roughly 3–3.5
million
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barrels
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. Qatar,
although
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 still the lowest, showed slight growth to just under 1
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, countries, saudi, arabia, million, barrels, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated
  • oil production capacity
  • Gulf countries
  • period between 1990 and 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • relatively stable
  • overall trend
  • highest production capacity
  • lowest production capacity
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