The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007

The two maps illustrate the modifications that took place in the
Potland
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Portland
town between 1950 and 2007.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
this
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town
had
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has
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developed and become more
urbanized
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and modern over the period.
According to
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the maps, in 1950 the area was
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a quite
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quite
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quiet
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, natural, and undeveloped place with many grasslands,
while
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in 2005 it
has
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had
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experienced significant changes.
First,
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a small park was constructed
on
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in
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the Northwest. The industrial area had been removed to make way for
car
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a car
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park.
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,
swimming
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a swimming
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pool was introduced to the map
in
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the Northern side. Another striking change was
many
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that many
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houses were added
into
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on
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the right side with many shops
run
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from the East to the West.
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additionally
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,
cinema
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a cinema
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facility was built in the Southern part.
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, in 2007, the road was extended, which
run
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runs
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from the South to the North and
surrounded
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is surrounded
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by
yacht
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a yacht
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marina
were
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where
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sea
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the sea
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used to be.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • coast
  • beach
  • town
  • harbor
  • road
  • house
  • houses
  • shop
  • shops
  • park
  • field
  • farm
  • water
  • map
  • year
  • grow
  • build
  • built
  • change
  • expand
  • develop
  • replace
  • new
  • old
  • more
  • less
  • along
  • near
  • center
  • edge
  • fishing
  • tourists
  • people
  • area
  • land
  • sea
  • bay
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