The line chart provides key information about the
aliment
intake in Australia in the period from 1950 to 2010. The units are measured in Check wording
food
kg
per person per year.
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Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the fruit rates have increased Linking Words
during
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over
the
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apply
times
. Fix the agreement mistake
time
While
the meat has declined throughout the terms. In Linking Words
term
of the seafood, it Fix the agreement mistake
terms
shown
a constant figure over the period.
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showed
According to
what is shown, the vegetables and fruit have upward trends, which reflect that the Australians changed their lifestyle over the years to enhance their health. It started with 140 Linking Words
kg
in 1950, Use synonyms
then
it Linking Words
has
fluctuated Verb problem
apply
rates
between 140 and 120 Check wording
apply
kg
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,
until 19920, it soared to 160 Punctuation problem
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kg
by the end of the term. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the fruit began with 80 Linking Words
kg
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,
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;
following
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this
it surged to 140 Punctuation problem
this,
kg
in 2010.
Meat and bread have decreased during the time Use synonyms
due to
their risks on the body, especially in beef, Linking Words
it has
starts at about 110, after that falls to 80 Verb problem
which
kg
.
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Finally
, the seafood has the lowest shares among all items, with about 20 Linking Words
kg
from the beginning to the end.Use synonyms