human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. discuss both views and give your opinion.
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task response
State your clear view in a line at the start, and restate it at the end.
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Add more ideas on how people can solve the issue, and give at least one clear example.
coherence
Use more linking words to show how ideas fit. For example: 'first', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'therefore'.
coherence
Make each paragraph focus on one idea. Use a short plan before you write.
content
The topic is clear and there is an effort to discuss both sides.
language
There is an effort to use simple and short sentences.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
Obesity has become the main issue for the society. In recent times, the population of unhealthy people has grown rapidly throughout the world. Undoubtedly, there are a plethora of reasons, which may impact individuals' health. This may affect their overall life as well.
The contemporary issue that fresh graduates lack the required soft skills to properly communicate in the office has raised significant concerns in the business world. Many new school leavers face this challenge because internships are not part of our academic system. Nonetheless, higher institutions hold the key to addressing this, by introducing classroom and work-integrated learning into the school curriculum. Therefore, examining this problem and exploring potential solutions provides valuable insights into resolving this issue.
In contemporary society, there is an ongoing debate about whether investment in public transportation should be valuable to lower hazardous pollution, while others think that improvements in roads and highways are as important. In this essay, I will discuss both views from my perspective.
Nowadays, people are born to have longer lives rather than older generations. Positive and negative sides influence this case, and this essay will explain from both views.
Technological developments are pushing toward self-driven vehicles, therefore drivers won't be necessary even in public transport Systems. In my opinion, the advantages are more than any difficulty this could come along with. Analyzing factors such as safety, standardization and organization will give us a better perspective.