The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year.

The two pie charts compare the proportions of different
energy
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sources
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used for total world
energy
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consumption
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and for
electricity
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generation
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in the most recent year.
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, coal and gas accounted for the largest shares in both categories, though their proportions differed considerably. A notable contrast is that combustible renewables and waste made up a significant part of total
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consumption
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but played only a small role in
electricity
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generation
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. In terms of total world
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consumption
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, oil made up the highest proportion at 34.3%, followed by coal at 25.1% and gas at 20.9%. Combustible renewables and waste accounted for a
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10.6%. The remaining
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contributed relatively small shares, with nuclear
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at 6.5%, hydroelectric power at 2.2%, and other
sources
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at just 0.4%. For
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generation
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,
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, the pattern was different. Coal dominated with 39.8%, significantly higher than its share in total
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use. Gas and hydroelectric power were
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major contributors, representing 19.6% and 16.1% respectively. Nuclear power made up 15.7%,
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oil played a much smaller role at only 6.7%. Combustible renewables and waste (2.1%) and other
sources
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(0.1%) accounted for minimal proportions.
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,
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fossil fuels remained the primary
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for both
energy
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consumption
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and
electricity
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generation
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, the specific mix varied substantially between the two categories.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, sources, consumption, electricity, generation with synonyms.
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