The local council is planning to create ‘dispersal zones’ in certain areas of the city to try to reduce street fighting.what is your opinion?

1.In

this

Linking Words

paper, the authors test whether an allosteric

drug

Use synonyms

Punctuation problem

apply

show examples

with a catalytic-site tyrosine kinase inhibitor (TKI) can control chronic myeloid

leukemia

Change the spelling

leukaemia

show examples

(CML) better than one

drug

Use synonyms

on its own. ABL001 binds in the myristoyl pocket of BCR-ABL1 and turns the kinase off. Nilotinib sits in the catalytic site. Each

drug

Use synonyms

misses a different set of BCR-ABL1 mutants, so one

drug

Use synonyms

alone can still leave

small

Correct article usage

a small

show examples

group of cells that still grow. In mouse CML xenografts, the two drugs together shrank tumours, and they didn’t grow back after treatment stopped. The ABL001-nilotinib pair left little room for resistance in

this

Linking Words

setting.

musabalsofayan

Nov 28, 2025

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task

Give a clear view to the task: say what you think about the work and add your own view.

coherence

Make ideas in a plain order and use small links to join them.

examples

Add more facts or data from the study to back up points.

grammar

Check small grammar and use different kinds of sentence forms.

content

The part about the drug pair and its effect is easy to read.

insight

The line connects the result to less room for resistance.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »- a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

1
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

101 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7.5
band
In some countries, people encourage their children to get a job or to travel after their secondary education and before their university education. What are the advantages or disadvantages of doing so?
In some countries, it is commonly believed that children must provide their experiences either by finding jobs or travelling after the culmination of their secondary education and before entering university. There are numerous advantages and disadvantages to this belief which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. As far as I am concerned the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
7
band
In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on individualism, with people prioritizing their personal goals and desires over collective interests. Is this a positive or negative development?
I ndividualism is becoming very common in this modern era where individuals prioritize their personal aims and aspirations over common interests. I believe this has a good impact on society and this essay will outline positive aspects of individualism in the following paragraphs including relevant examples.
7.5
band
In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the availability of foods produced in diverse parts of the world. Some may laud the convenience and excitement that would be accompanied by eating international foods in your home country, while, in this essay, I intend to argue that the drawbacks of this trend far outweigh its benefits. The reasons for this are as follows.
7
band
Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and diseas. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
People have different views as to whether the government should pay more attention to decreasing environmental pollution and housing issues in order to deter illness and disease. In my perspective, despite mitigating environmental degradation and housing problems bringing about many more benefits, I firmly believe that the government should focus on other fields to assist probihit illness and disease.
6
band
Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is said that people who accomplish their goals in life are largely influenced by luck. This essay disagrees with that statement because luck is just a small figure to become successful and hard work is the potential step for achieving aims.

The local council is planning to create ‘dispersal zones’ in certain areas of the city to try to reduce street fighting.what is your opinion?

In some countries, people encourage their children to get a job or to travel after their secondary education and before their university education. What are the advantages or disadvantages of doing so?

In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on individualism, with people prioritizing their personal goals and desires over collective interests. Is this a positive or negative development?

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and diseas. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.