Recent developments in technology have greatly changed our ways of life in a positive way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

2.The authors test

this

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idea in a few linked ways. They first show how ABL001 works as an allosteric inhibitor with crystal structures, NMR, and tests of ABL1 activity and cell growth in

BCR-ABL1- dependent

Correct your spelling

BCR-ABL1-dependent

cells. They

then

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track resistance with a barcoded KCL-22 population treated with ABL001 or nilotinib, to see which pre-existing clones grow out under each drug.

Next,

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they treat mouse CML xenografts with ABL001 or nilotinib alone and with

ABL001-nilotinib

Correct article usage

the ABL001-nilotinib

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pair and follow tumour shrinkage and relapse after treatment stops. They

also

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look at early phase I data for ABL001 in patients with CML to confirm that the drug has clinical activity and to flag resistance in humans.

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This piece shows a path of steps, but it does not give a clear view or answer to a question. Add a line that states your view, and then give a short set of reasons and a final wrap-up.

coherence

The order is clear with linking words like first, then, next. Use more breaks into small parts and use words to tie each part back to the main idea.

structure

Steps are in a clear order with sign words.

content

The writer uses exact tests and names to show methods.

coherence

Link words help show the flow from one part to the next.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

112 words

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