At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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are facing

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noticeable number of young

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population of other

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are senior citizens. In

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article, I discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of

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trend and clarify why

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advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The most important advantage of

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of young

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in a community is their role in economic productivity. Young people are the most valuable human resource for

countries

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that decrease their dependency on

foreigner

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skilled

labor

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.

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, some European

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suffering from

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population have to import

young

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workforce in different sectors

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health to industry.

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, Young people are inspiring in all the communities, since they make

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and social

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that most

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revolutions have begun

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movements are a milestone point for their progress.

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, nurturing

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group requires specific facilities and

infrustructures

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infrastructures

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if they are ignored,

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population

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will not

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, young people demand

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schools

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,

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system, and any other

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necessities

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to make them

skillful

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and talented. Unfortunately, most

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developing

countries

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have

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young generation, but their governments do not invest in their

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and promotion, and

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, they can not benefit their society. In conclusion, in my opinion, young

adults

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are beneficial

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society because of their role in economic growth and social

development

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.

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young

adults

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are known as a valuable source for

countries

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, we should consider

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matter that without investing in their

development

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, societies can not make use of them.