The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart illustrates where
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classes are located in one Australian town. The horizontal bar chart gives data on the type of
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aforementioned
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classes young Australians are currently participating in. There are four major locations for these
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classes. Private studios comprise almost half of all locations (48
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). Standing at the second step are school halls, which in essence are halls used after the conventional school hours, occupying roughly a quarter of locations.
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are community halls and
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at 18%, standing not far from he least section, i.e. college-based studios at exactly 10
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. Concerning the bar chart, it is evident that ballet and tap
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are more popular among the 11-year-olds and younger,
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modern
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appeals to 11 to 16-year-olds. There are almost 600 students under 11, doubling the older age group.
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, about 300 students aged 11 or younger gravitate towards modern
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is almost half the participants of the older age group. Tap
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is almost the same at around 420 students
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a small margin in
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of the
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age group.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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