The graph below depicts the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie charts below shows how electricity is used in an average home in the same country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make cmparison where relevant.

The graph gives information about the demand for electricity in the country of England

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the

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summer and winter days. As for the two pie charts, they illustrate how electric energy is consumed by the people in the same

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country.

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it is clear that

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the highest amount of power was used in the cold period, and it was mostly applied to heating rooms and heating water. As for the lowest watts, we can see that it was in hot and humid times.

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the data shown, vacuum cleaners, food mixers, lighting, and TV shared the same percentage, which was 15%, and it rose by 2.5% for ovens, kettles, and washing machines.

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, the need for

warmness

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escalated higher, which led to it increasing by 35 amperes. At the beginning of the timeline, it was reported that the

individuals

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request

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for electronics

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not that much, because all of the phases were under 20000 volts. But, compared to it, the necessity for warmth was greater, and it showed that all of the terms were above 30000, and in 21, it reached its top point

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(45000).