You are planning a tour with your family to a tourist destination. Write a letter to a hotel manager asking about the availability of accommodation for the days you will be here and also tell him what type of room you prefer.

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to inquire about booking rooms in your hotel for my

family

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family's

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trip to

the

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apply

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London. I would like to confirm the dates with you

first,

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before processing online bookings. I am planning to stay in

the

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London at your hotel for a week from 24th of December to 31st December 2025.

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, I need two rooms, as we are four

mambers

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members

in the family. I prefer the rooms which can

accomodate

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accommodate

two persons. My specific preference is the bed, I need two

shaperate

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single

beds in each room with firm mattresses.

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heater

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a heater

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facility and wifi connection

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are

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the most

importatnce

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important

requirement

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. Other than

that

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that,

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everything could be compromised. Please reach

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out if any availability is there

according to

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requirments

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requirements

and dates, I would love to book with your hotel. As soon as, I will recieve confirmation I will

procceed

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proceed

with the online booking through your website. Thank you for your support and assistance. Yours faithfully, Darshita

darshitasoni98

Nov 30, 2025

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content

Tell your ask in a clear way. Say you need two rooms for four people and the exact dates.

grammar

Fix big grammar and spell wrong words. Use 'in London', 'two separate beds', 'a heater', 'wifi', 'Please contact me'.

structure

Try to keep ideas in their own part. Use short, simple sentence and one idea per part.

greeting closing

Polite tone in Dear Sir and Yours faithfully.

content

You give the dates and place you want.

content

You ask for what you need.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

165 words

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