The chart below gives information on the number of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia betwween 2009 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the count of employees in various jobs who migrated to Australia from 2009 to 2012.

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, it can be seen that in all periods of time

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workers have the largest number.

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the lowest number

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employees from the computer programmer.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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