A friend had a new born baby, you have picked up a present for the baby and want to visit to give it to him / her. Write a letter to – - Congratulate your friend. - Tell him why you picked up the mentioned present. - Suggest arrangements for the visit.

Dear Tom, I hope

this

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letter finds you in good health and

spirit

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spirits

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. I'm writing

this

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letter

show

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to show

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my heartwarming

congratulation

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congratulations

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towards your

new born

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newborn

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baby boy, Danny D. First of all,

congratulation

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congratulations

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for

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becoming a father, and being

role

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a role

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model

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for

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your family.

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, I'm so happy to be part of the small gathering that you have organised at your home

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apply

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this

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upcoming

weekends

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weekend

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. To be honest, I have selected a golden

rings

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ring

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for your baby, which has his name

emboidered

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embroidered

on it. On top of that,

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ring is made of

special

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alloy which can be easily

adjustable

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without any trouble. I'll be arriving

through

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flight to your city so that

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can take part in the event that you have organised.

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, I'll need a small favour

that

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, that

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you'd

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you could

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pick me up from the airport, and help me

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apply

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find the accommodation for my

one week

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one-week

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stay

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stay,

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then

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it would be greatly helpful. I hope to see you soon, and do get back to

whenever

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me whenever

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your

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free. Talk to you soon!! Bye, Jack

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Dec 1, 2025

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grammar

Fix small grammar. Use I as a big word. I kind work on spelling and numbers. Use short, clear sentences.

structure

Put one idea in each paragraph. Use a clear order: greeting, joy, gift, visit plan, close.

vocabulary

Use easy words from the common list. Keep the voice calm and polite.

content

Check the gift idea fits, and tell the plan in a simple way.

greeting

Warm start with the kind greeting.

content

The notes of the gift and visit plan are clear, in a simple way.

tone

Polite ending showing you want to see them soon.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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