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Writing Samples
Band 4

Part 1 Your city library is closing for renovation for three months 1 Write a short massage to your classmate about how feel and what ypu will do indtead

Dear John, Are you
A
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apply
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ware
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aware
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of
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that
library
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the library
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 is closing for tidying for
a half
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half a
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years
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year
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? I am very happy
becouse
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because
 I don't like it. I think that we
are
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need
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to fined
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fined
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find
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other
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another
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 library. If we
are
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apply
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find
New
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a New
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 library, there are A lot of
books
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books,
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 maybe we
are
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can
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 find interesting books.
As A result
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, we are reading books. Best wishes, Shoh

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task
Clearly answer the task. Say how you feel about the library closing and what you will do next in one short plan.
coherence
Use simple words to show links between ideas. Start a new paragraph for the plan and use words like 'next', 'then', 'but' and 'also'.
language
Check spelling and grammar the most. Correct common mistakes and make easy changes to tips such as 'aware', 'three months', 'another library', 'find' and 'there are a lot of books'.
format
Keep a friendly tone in a short letter. Keep the greeting 'Dear John' and the closing 'Best wishes'.
format
Greeting and closing are present in the letter.
content
Shows a simple idea of a plan to move to another library.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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