The charts gives information about the rate of electrical using for different purposes and how much time spent by the owner of houses in the year 1920 to 2019 in a country.

The graph represents information about the rate of electricity used for different purposes and the time spent by the owners of houses in a country, in the year 1920 to 2019. The electricity

that is

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used to compare has three different things,

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as a washing machine, a Refrigerator and a vacuum cleaner. In 1920, the percentage of washing machines was 40%, which is the highest one and has grown to 1960 at 70% but suddenly

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down in 20 years later. Afterwards, it's back to the old record of 1960 in 2000. Growth until touch 75% in 2019.

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, the highest percentage in 2019

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100%

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for

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the

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refrigerator

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refrigerators

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and vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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. These two electrical have increased every year , but the beginning of the vacuum cleaner is 30%,

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the refrigerator is 5%.

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, refrigerators are growing exponentially. The time

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spent

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on

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housework per

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week in years 1920 to 2019

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is

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has

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decreased from the start until 2019. The percentage in 1920 is 50% and drop to 10% in 2019.