The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pictures illustrate a small town centre, which is known as lslip nowadays. The second map shows the construction plan for the development of the lslip. The map shows that now main lane is

located

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now located

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from

western

Correct article usage

the western

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eastern

Correct article usage

the eastern

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direction and the opposite on both sides of the highway, it contains only supermarkets.

However

Linking Words

, after the plan development

road

Use synonyms

will be constructed in the form of a circle around the town, which is called a dual carriageway. The northern shops of the

road

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will be changed to other facilities,

inclusing

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including

bus station,car park, some new housing areas and advanced shopping malls.

Furthermore

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, shops on the south border of the

road

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will turn into only pedestrian shops in the same place. As the data collected from both maps, the area of the park will become shorter and located in the same place , but along the main lane

southeastern

Punctuation problem

, southeastern

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rear.

Moreover

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, now school located on the

side

Correct word choice

southwest side

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bath

Fix capitalization

Bath

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southwest side, but after

Correct pronoun usage

that it

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will be on the left side of the south of the main

road

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. The draft of the development of LSLIP shows that new housing societies will be constructed near the park by demolishing some old houses.

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Dec 5, 2025

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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199 words

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pedestrian-only zone
dual carriageway
current
surrounded by
propose
infrastructure
bus station
car park
residential housing
traffic flow
connectivity
green spaces
recreational areas
development plans
main features
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