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Band 3.5

The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.

The pie chart
eleborates
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elaborates
, about world five different countries percentage of places for
forest
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 and
timber
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 in each region. over all among all 5 countries, North America rank the
topestof
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top of
 all, for
forest
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 and
timber
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 regions,
while
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 Asia remains the lowest among all. To commence, the percentage of
forest
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 found in North America is the highest of all ,it is 25%
while
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 the
timber
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 was 5% more than the
forest
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.
However
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, Africa followed second in the list,
for
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timber
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 and
forest
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 production, it is 23% and 16% respectively.
Moreover
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, Europe
also
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 have
near
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same
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the same
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 trends
to
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as
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 Africa, incase of
timber
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 and
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forest
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forest,
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 it is 20% and 18% respectively.
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on
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 the other hand, African regions for
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forest
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forests
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 are 27% ,
while
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 for
timbers
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timber
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 fall short by 3 folds.
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Similarly
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 Asia
having
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has
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 the least in
the
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apply
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timber
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 and
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forest
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forests
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 compared to other nations, it is 18% and 14% only.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, timber with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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