Today, many people getting married at the age of thirties and having children rather than marry at teen age. Is this a positive or negative development?

2.The authors test

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idea in a few linked ways. They use IL-17RAfl/fl mice crossed with different Cre lines to switch off IL-17RA in T cells, myeloid cells, keratinocytes or in all tissues.

Psoriasis- like

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skin changes are brought on daily 5% imiquimod cream on the back and ears for 5 – 6 days, with scores each day for redness, scaling and skin thickness. To see how inflamed the skin is, ear samples go through flow cytometry for myeloid cells, H & E and MPO/F4/80 stains on sections, and qPCR on ear RNA.

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improvement

The text is not a full answer to the task. It shows method work, not a view on the topic. Add your view on whether the idea may be good or bad.

structure

Use a short plan. Start with a small view, then give a few points, and end with a wrap up.

linking

Link ideas with clear words. Use first, next, also, but, therefore to join ideas.

detail

Give more detail or a clear example from the task to show more ideas.

style

Use simple words. Try not to use long or hard words.

structure

Clear steps in test work are shown in order

cohesion

The flow moves in a clear path

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

93 words

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