You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: - what course are you doing now - why you are not satisfied with that course - what course you would like to change to.

Dear

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Jones, I am writing to you with

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regards

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to the

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that I am doing with which is the photography

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, the

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code is PH002. I am very excited to be able to

enroll

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in

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as photography is my

favorite

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hobby since I was

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I am looking forward to learning new techniques to improve my skills.

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, there are some problems

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the

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which

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me feel extremely frustrated and disappointed. The first thing is

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lecturer of the

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was very unprofessional, he just read all the PowerPoint

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and seldom

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with the

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.

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that, the start time of the

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was too late for me. The

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starts at 8pm and ends at 11pm every Wednesday,

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is so inconvenient to me as I live in Tuen Mun and I have

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8am

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on Thursday morning. In light of

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, I kindly request you to let me change to another photography

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which starts at 12pm on Thursday, the

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code is PH003. I would be extremely grateful if you could manage to help me with

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problem. Thank you for your assistance

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I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. If you have any questions, you can contact me by the email [email protected]. Best regards, Jason