The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007

The given line graph illustrates the proportion of
households
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that use
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cars
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in Great Britain over a
period
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of 36 years, starting from 19971
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,
although
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the
number
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of
households
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with
cars
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increased throughout the
period
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, the figure for those without
cars
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decreased sharply.
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, the
number
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of people with one car remained consistently high compared to others. At the beginning of the
period
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, the percentage of individuals who had no car was well under 50.
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it continued to fall down to finish at around 25. In sharp contrast to
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, the
number
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of
households
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with two
cars
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was well under 10, and it fluctuated around an upward trend to reach a peak
at the end
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of the
period
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, around 25 in 2007. Turning to other graphs, the percentage of
households
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with one or three or more
cars
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was around 45 and 3, respectively.
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there was an upward tendency in the percentage of
households
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with three or more
cars
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to reach around 6 in 2007, the
number
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for one car was steady over the
period
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, apart from a brief decline in 2007 by 2%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, cars, period, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • household
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • increase
  • decrease
  • ownership
  • period
  • peak
  • dip
  • noteworthy
  • consistent
  • dramatic
  • highlight
  • significant
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