The bar chart below shows the US top ten proccesed food export markets for last year and 6 years ago.

The bar shows statistics about the United States' meal export in terms of 10 various countries (

Canada

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, Mexico, the EU, Japan, China, South Korea, the Philippines, Australia, Hong Kong, and the rest of the world) previous year and 6

years

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ago.

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Canada

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kept its dominance in both

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, having a notable gap with the second most

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populous one

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, the rest of the world.

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apply

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countries, like the Philippines, Australia and Hong Kong , have the least amount , changing marginally

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of the period. As the graph shows,

Canada

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had the highest export rates , being 13.2 and 9.3

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year and 6

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ago , respectively. In both

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, the Philippines, Hong Kong and Australia have practically the same percentage with varying by less than one per cent. Next to

Canada

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is the rest of the world , having 6.3% at the start of the period and 11%

at the end

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Dec 10, 2025

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The bar chart below shows the US top ten proccesed food export markets for last year and 6 years ago.

In the future, no body will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree to this opinion.

In some countries, it is possible for people to have a variety of food that has been transported from all over the world. To what extent do you think its benefits outweigh the drawbacks? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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