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The bar chart below shows the US top ten processed food export markets for last year and six years ago.

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The bar chart shows the top expert markets in
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 of the world were the highest similar
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 the lowest were the same Australia and Hong Kong.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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