The bar chart below shows the US' top ten processed food export markets for last year and six years ago

The bar chart provides statistics of exported meals in
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$ in the United States between 10 various
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in different years.
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, all governments had different figures in the time period.
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Canada and the rest of the world were leading in timeline, other
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and megapolises expected much lower results. As the bar chart shows, Canada was the dominating exporter in both 2 years, having 13.2
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year and 9.3 six years ago. Mexico and the European Union had almost the same figures (6.1 and 4, 4.4 and 2.6), differing only by about 1.2
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each other. Eastern
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(Japan, China, South Korea and the Philippines), despite having normal trends (2.5 and 2.4, 2.1 and 0.8, 1.6 and 0.9, 1.2 and 0.5). Australia and Hong Kong had seen the lowest results, being 1.8 in the previous year and 0.6 earlier combined. All other
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had 11 and 0.6, ranking in the next place after Canada.

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