Mrs. Barrette, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs. Barrette. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home why you would like to do this work when you will and will not available

Dear

Mrs.

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Barrette, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about my keen

intereset

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interest

towards pet care that you have advertised in the local newspaper. I am

practising

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vetanary

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veterinarian

in the college and I

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also

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have also

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been certified in taking care of pets.

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, I

have

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well-versed in handling the tantrums of pets

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the

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apply

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understanding

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apply

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their needs. I would be glad if I get an opportunity to opt for

this

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work as it will be a plus for my career.

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, I can earn an extra income

which

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can help me to pay my college fees

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of relying on my parents. I will be

avaliable

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available

in the morning from 6 a.

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. to 8 a.

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. and in the evening

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from 5

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. to 9 p.

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. I will not be

avaibale

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available

between

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during

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afternoon

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period as I need to attend my class during that time. I am eagerly waiting for a prompt response from you to give

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extensive help towards the pet care. Yours faithfully, Lita.

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Dec 13, 2025

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clarity

Explain how you will help at home with clear tasks such as feeding pets, cleaning rooms, walking a dog, or sitting with the pet. This shows you know the job.

language

Fix spelling and grammar: intereset -> interest; vetanary -> veterinary; avaliable -> available; avaibale -> available; afternoon.

structure

Make one idea in each paragraph. Start with why you want the work, then how you will help, then when you are free.

tone

Keep the tone polite and add a short line that says you hope to meet or talk soon.

content

Mention any small fact that shows you have some pet care work or help with care before, in a short way.

format

The letter has a clear start with Dear and end with Yours faithfully.

availability

The writer gives some hours of work and when not to work.

tone

Polite and calm tone in the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

167 words

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