The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

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it is clear that

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there are differences between the categories, as some figures are higher than others

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the data is not the same for all groups. In detail, dolphins recorded the highest figure in 2018 at just over 50. Seals followed in the same year at approximately 45. Meanwhile, whales showed lower numbers compared to the other species throughout the period. Looking at the rest of the data, the remaining figures fall between the highest and lowest values.

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some numbers are similar, each category shows a different pattern over time. In general, the chart shows clear differences between seals, whales and dolphins.

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The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • explain why you will be visiting the town • give details of where you will be staying • ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment

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